Divine Heir - 2020 Book release!
Hi there! I am introducing my first book ever on amazon.com
https://www.amazon.com/Divine-Heir-In...
It's dark science fiction and fantasy. The story is complex and has a lot of characters, but very unique! Try the sample pages and see if interested. The story starts off a bit slow, but that is because it's such a complex story!
This is about a prince, who lives 10,000 years in our future on a remote planet that was created by a Lyran Goddess. He has a great happy life full of loving family and friends...and then one day gets captured by his enemies and is made a slave. He is not the typical hero you seen in fantasy novels. The prince is just a normal guy, sweet, not especially smart, and definitely not a warrior. So why is he the most interesting guy in the book??
https://www.amazon.com/Divine-Heir-In...
It's dark science fiction and fantasy. The story is complex and has a lot of characters, but very unique! Try the sample pages and see if interested. The story starts off a bit slow, but that is because it's such a complex story!
This is about a prince, who lives 10,000 years in our future on a remote planet that was created by a Lyran Goddess. He has a great happy life full of loving family and friends...and then one day gets captured by his enemies and is made a slave. He is not the typical hero you seen in fantasy novels. The prince is just a normal guy, sweet, not especially smart, and definitely not a warrior. So why is he the most interesting guy in the book??
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Feb 09, 2020 12:48PM
It reads very well. You have talent. Your mystery in the first chapter is a very good hook and the presentation unique. However, I believe there is room for improvement. For example, I would change the word "captives" to "captors" in your Amazon book description and I found at least four other possible problems in the first chapter. Still, it was a very good read.
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Thanks for the support! Yes I definitely will change the amazon description! I hope you enjoy the book!!
