Out of Mind Out of Sight S1 E11
This week on Buffy and the Art of Story: Out of Mind Out of Sight
(Season 1, Episode 11 of Buffy the Vampire Slayer).
Along with plot turns about an invisible girl, this episode covers (1) scene transitions (done so well!); (2) flashbacks (maybe not done so well) (3) theme; (4) strong dialogue; and (5) a midpoint that’s not so strong.
As always, the discussion is spoiler-free, except at the end (with plenty of warning).
Sorry, no Season 1 DVD commentary for Out of Mind Out of Sight.
Next Up: Prophecy Girl S1 E12
Last Week: Nightmares S1 E10
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Lisa M. Lilly is the author of the bestselling four-book Awakening supernatural thriller series and the Q.C. Davis mysteries. She also wrote the short-story collection The Tower Formerly Known as Sears and Two Other Tales of Urban Horror, the title story of which was made into the short film Willis Tower.
In addition to fiction, Lilly writes non-fiction under L.M. Lilly.
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Episode Transcript for Out of Mind Out of Sight
Coming Soon. (I promise, as Buffy might say.)
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