Double Negatives

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Instant Quiz


Can you improve the sentence below? Scroll to the bottom of today’s post for the answer.


He wasn’t about to step foot in the meeting room until the debate was over.


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Here’s a troublesome sentence from the Social Q’s column in the New York Times from November 3, 2019: 


“But if you can’t find a way to trust your husband again, I don’t believe you can afford not to divorce him.”


What does that sentence mean? I’ve read and reread it, I still wouldn’t be willing to swear that I understand it. I think this is what it’s saying:


“If you can’t find a way to trust your husband again, you need to divorce him.”


But there are three negatives (can’t find, don’t believe, not divorce). It takes a lot of plodding to work your way through that. Why not just say what you mean?


Here’s some advice for you: write positive sentences.


I can’t believe Janet didn’t get the promotion.  CONFUSING


I’m amazed that Janet wasn’t promoted.  BETTER


While we’re at it, let’s talk about an urban legend concerning double negatives: two negatives indicate a positive. No. English isn’t math.


Many languages – including Russian and Spanish – have double negatives. Do you really want to tell the Russians that they don’t know how to do math?


And this may surprise you: Old English used to have double negatives too. They’re gone now, of course, and they’re considered a diction mistake. Don’t use a double negative (“I don’t have nothing”) at a job interview! But don’t let anyone tell you that two negatives make a positive.


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Instant Quiz ANSWER


“Set foot” is a better expression.


He wasn’t about to set foot in the meeting room until the debate was over.  BETTER





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