Come Home for Christmas Revised and Improved!
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Good morning! As I’ve grown as a writer, I’ve often examined my older works and thought, I could make this better if I wanted to. This Christmas, I chose to do just that to one of my early books, Come Home for Christmas. The seeds were all there, but the story needed fleshing out. There were too many things that were mentioned, but never fully explained. So, I decided to do just that.
Here’s the blurb:
This past year has been a miserable one for Krista Jacobs, and what’s going to make it even worse is having to spend Christmas at Seven Oaks, the Alberta ranch that was her home until her uncle tossed her out on her ear before her nineteenth birthday. But Uncle Charles is gone and has left her something in his will—something she can only have if she [image error]spends Christmas at the ranch with Ethan Terrance, her step-cousin, and the man she’d hoped to marry ten years ago.
When Charles Terrance died, the last thing Ethan expected to discover was that not only had his dad sabotaged his relationship with Krista, he’d cheated her out of the inheritance that should’ve been hers ten years ago. Since Ethan’s never been able to forget the woman he loved, he’ll do whatever he has to in order to make things right—including having his lawyer send her a request she can’t ignore. Krista has to come home for Christmas.
So what did I change? Well, to start, I gave you a peek at what had made Krista’s year a truly miserable one by letting you get to know her ex, Russian-born hockey player, Theo.
Then, I explained what had motivated her Uncle Charles to treat her so badly ten years ago.
After that, I fleshed out the scope of Charles Terrance’s crime.
Finally, I added a little touch of suspense when Theo shows up to take Krista home.
All in all, the revised story gives the readers more of what they were looking for, a Christmas miracle.
So, why not check it out for yourself? Come Home for Christmas is available at all Amazon online stores and is free to read on Kindle Unlimited.
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Christmas Romance
