I've been asking for reviews and comments from fellow authors and readers for the last few weeks and I've had some amazing feedback. The writing community is awesome. I can't thank them enough.
One thing that tickled my pickle today was a message on twitter. An American author had queried my use of 'pocket rocket'. In Britain it means a short energetic person. Apparently in the US it has a whole new meaning. I won't mention the British and US definitions of 'fanny.'
I think I'm going to keep it in and just be amused if anyone queries it.