First Page: untitled M/M Paranormal Romance

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Lukas von Rainer was at the hotel bar with his fellow Wardens when the priest passed. Everyone's eye was drawn to him, not only for the black vestments which brought out his dusky complexion and dark hair, but also for the rugged shape of his jaw and the surety of h...