This is Your Brain On 1st Draft

Right to the snippets.

I’ve rewritten this scene a few times, and while I can’t guarantee it hasn’t been tweaked in the final version, this was an interesting bit to write.  So for something completely different, I’m going to post the snippet, with my personal thoughts interjected in parenthesis.  This is really how my brain works.  you’ve been warned.

Hunter and Shannon have a reunion, about halfway through Renegades: Book 2 of The Wildblood.  They are on the verge of a serious relationship....