Hooking an Acquisitions Editor

So, as I was saying, Blue Thread used to be way different. After major deconstruction and reconstruction, the new Blue Thread underwent polishing, polishing, polishing, polishing, and…polishing. And still the acquisitions editors at Ooligan Press wanted more. Sylvia Spratt and her co-editor Leah Brown at Ooligan went through the final rounds. Here's Sylvia's version of the process:

Ruth:What did you think of Blue Thread the first time you read the draft? Sylvia: Honestly? I thought, "Wow...