And so the rewriting continues

Worked a little on the graphic novel yesterday, trying to fine-tune the character looks, (Ivy is being difficult) but mostly it was Rachel and Trent in her backyard discussing things in book nine.  I'm liking this book a LOT, but I find I'm in a quandary.  Over book eight, Trent and Rachel start to redefine their relationship.  (Relax, there are more kinds of relationships other than hate and sex.)  Trent has shifted his focus and some of his reactions are still based in his old frame of...