Teaser finally finished and up while book is edited

After a long lack of computer access (stupid trojans and viruses) I finally was able to finish work on the trailer, well more like a teaser, for the first book in my series.
Also, thanks to an online friend and fellow author, Roarke's book is undergoing editing which I hope will please some people.

I was going to wait to put ther teaser up until I had the edited edition up but am looking for some tips on it since I did the whole thing on Microsoft Picture It and has been about the most daring I've ever been with something like that.

Also, anyone who has read the e-book version here on Goodreads and would like to see the edited version let me know and when it's up I'll let you know or will certainly e-mail a copy.

Now I can get back to work on the second book which has somehow lagged with a lack of computer and things crashing in all sorts of ways personally.