Thoughts on Fall of Sky City

[image error]Did not finish, 16%

I was ready to love this book. The blurb sounded cool, I loved the idea of the magic Marks that came to people, and the setting held promise. Unfortunately, it became clear almost immediately that I wasn’t going to be a fan of the execution of the writing itself.

A lot of thought went into this world, which from what I can figure, is a water-heavy planet in a binary star system. Steampunk tech rules, and there are flying airships and science, science everywhere. But all th...