First Page: Unnamed Paranormal

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Sweat dripped down my forehead. My hair hung damp in my face, a limp version of its former self. We'd been at this for hours. Hours. And all I'd managed to move was a pencil. Two inches.

"Again, Cameron," barked my tutor, Deacon. "You're not focusing. Move it to the ...