BREAKING ORDER is Getting a New, Improved Edition

After the constructive reviews on Goodreads and Amazon showing concern that this novel is MG instead of YA as well as littered with typos, I have decided to pull the plug on BREAKING ORDER and revise it, edit it, and release a new edition once it is ready. There are a few things I'm addressing to that many of you have expressed your opinions on:

- The characters' ages and their writing style.
- The use of romance in the book.
- The prose style vs the age category.
- The character development in this book.
- The jarring differences between it and the next installment in tone.

If you have anything you wish to discuss pertaining to what you would like to see more of in the new edition, feel free to express it here. I want to let readers voice their opinions before I up and change everything. More than likely, the old story will be completely removed from Amazon until its new release, as well as Splintering Reality when the time comes.

Thank you for understanding, and feel free to discuss your likes, dislikes, and things you'd like to see more of/changed in a newer, revised story. This could be a new character element introduced earlier, more of a certain element or character, etc.. I will already say I'm considering adding more of Enya in the new edition and possibly another POV. I'll see what my editor says once I hire one.