Feedback Request

Here's a new version of the query from Face-Lift 672. I'm putting it here rather than in the comments there because the comment trail was already very long. Any input you have for the author may be left here.


Dear Evil Editor:

Alexios has had a busy few months: falling in love, dying, and leading a rebellion—in that order.

Alexios is a young, orphaned fisherman living in ancient Phoenicia during the time of Christ. He and his love Korinna drown in a storm, and without a way to atone for their s...