Mark Me Excerpt

One of my WIPs Mark Me is.....well, hell, it's shaping up to be a porno with dialogue.

The characters: Vicktor (The Dom) and Daniel (The Sub) are so unbelievably hot and horny for each other that every time I write them in a scene together, they end up naked, or half-clothed, sucking and fucking each other. LOL.

They are sooo not complaining.

So I thought that I'd share with you a bit of their "perversity". LOL. Enjoy!





"You have a nice place," he heard Daniel say from behind him,as they stepped into the hallway leading towards the living room, and he turnedto look down at the other man.He just didn't understand it. Daniel was a stranger,practically anyway, they'd barely spoken to each other and yet Vicktor wantedto gather the other man into his arms and never let him go.What kind of fucked up shit was that? He totally blamedThaddeus and Desmond and their sickening marriage. The two of them oozed loveand passion and desire, it was obviously spilling over onto the rest of them.What a fucking pain.Well, it might have fizzled his mind a bit, but that wastruly all it had done was fizzle it. His mind wasn't fried yet, and itdefinitely wouldn't get fried on someNewborn Sub that his best friend hadintroduced him to. He was The FuckingDom, emphasis on the fucking, and he didn't bow to anyone. Never had, neverwould.Pep talk completed, Vicktor allowed himself to smile downwolfishly at Daniel."Thanks," he said before stepping closer to the smaller man.He wasn't surprised when Daniel took a small step backwards. He'd expected it.Vicktor tilted his head to the side and felt the skin around his mouth stretchas his smile widened."Are you afraid of me Daniel?" he questioned the youngerman. His eyes zeroed in on Daniel's Adam's apple as the other man swallowedthickly. Vicktor noticed all the tell-tell signs of fear and arousal on Daniel.The fluttering pulse at the base of his neck, the light sheen of sweat on hisbrow, the blown pupils, the constant need to re-wet his lips. These were allthings that told The Dom that not only was Daniel afraid, he was turned on.Glancing down at the smaller man's trousers Vicktor almost chuckled, he amendedthat previously statement, Daniel wasn't just turned on, he was massivelyturned on. Stepping towards the other man again until his back was pressedagainst the wall Vicktor asked again."Are you afraid of me Daniel?"Daniel shook his head, answering Vicktor's question with a"no", even though his actions were saying "yes.""Good. I don't want you afraid of me. I want you to respectme," Vicktor said as he grabbed the bottom of Daniel's shirt and lifted it overthe other man's head before lowering his head and sucking up a mark on thesmaller man's chest."I want you to obey me and only me unless stated otherwise,"Vicktor continued, trailing his tongue down Daniel's torso, before unbuttoningand pulling down his jeans. His tongue tracing patterns in the other man'sflesh."I want you to want me," Vicktor whispered before licking upthe side of Daniel's engorged cock, the head a dark red, pre-come oozing fromthe slit at the top."I want you to need me," he continued before lowering hismouth onto Daniel's cock and sucking him down his throat, happy once again thathis gag reflex was practically non-existent.Releasing the smaller man's cock from his mouth he spun thesmaller man around and then lowered his nose to the crease of Daniel's ass. Heinhaled deeply, the musky, yet obviously, freshly washed scent of Daniel's assteasing and overwhelming his senses. Vicktor's eyes drifted closed, a feelingof rapturous wonder wrapping around him, his body shivering slightly as hethought about tasting that ass, right there, in his hallway.Vicktor wasn't one to deny himself anything, and with thatthought in mind, he lowered his head the rest of the way, his tongue stretching,almost of its own power and will, towards Daniel's ass hole, the dark, velvetchannel beckoning the long wet muscle to breach its defenses and take ithostage. Vicktor knew that his tongue, his mouth, his teeth and yes, hisfingers were more than up for the challenge, he just hoped that Daniel's asswouldn't surrender too quickly.He pierced the dark, hot opening with his tongue, dribblingsaliva into the hole before pushing in the tip of one finger. He smiled when heheard Daniel's low moan, knowing that the younger man had not intended for themto get to this point, this quickly, but when Vicktor wanted someone, he didn'tlet something as little as morals and societal expectations of a relationship'stimeline stop him from having them. And he wanted Daniel. Tonight. And probablyfor many nights following.