#TBT- It DOES Take A Year To Write Your Prose!!!

A recent trip down memory lane led me to a file on my flash drive with old blog posts. When I say old, I'm talking about 2009/2010 old...when I was an aspiring author, two years before I published my first book. These were my most commented on and shared posts. Unfortunately, they were lost and I've had to start over with my website. I decided to share my favorite ones for the next few weeks as my #ThrowBackThursday blog share. Check them out, hopefully you will find information that you can use or share! ##### How in the @&*% does Nora Roberts manage to publish three-four books a year under two different pen names, yet still have time to water and plant her garden?!?!?!?!????? Is there a ghostwriter in her house? I love Nora Roberts/J.D. Robb. I have twenty-five of my favorite books penned by her in my collection. Talk about inspiration! It seems like every few months I walk by the book section of my local grocery store and find two brand new books sitting on the shelf, one in each of her pen names. Wow, the woman is good! I watched an interview with her a year ago where she was asked about her writing schedule. Yeah, she’s definitely got one, and an office built by her husband where she writes. She also follows a strict writing routine that does, in fact, leave her time for her favorite past time, gardening. I, on the other hand, can’t seem to write a schedule let alone follow one! Plus, my four kids, ages ten to sixteen, are at a stage in life where they have various activities – Orchestra, Jazz band, art, book club, etc. - that demand I spend time taking them where they need to go. Nora’s children, on the other hand, are all grown. Her writing career started years ago when her boys were young and she was a single mom. Whatever she did to get her career started and make it to the level of success she’s seen over the years, I have to give her props. If I ever have the opportunity to meet her, I’m going to demand tips! But, until then, I have to stick to what I’ve learned. When I first began my writing journey, I checked out books from the library dealing with the art of writing. I remember one book entitled, This Year You Write Your Novel, by a well-known author, Walter Mosley. He is the famed author of books such as Devin in a Blue Dress, (later turned into a movie starring Denzel Washington), and many others. One look at the title and I scoffed, thinking, ‘A year? Yeah right. I’ve written my first three books already…in nine months!’ Sigh…..Don’t I feel like an idiot! Well, at least I had some form of confidence that encouraged me to keep going; even when I found out I still had a lot to work on! And now, two years later, I’m just beginning to see the EXIT sign as I near completion of my first book. In December my editor will be getting her hands on the manuscript, but the journey won’t end there. Once she sprinkles her fairy dust on it, it will come back for yet another rewrite. I’m praying that will be the last one because the characters for the next book are beginning to get tired of waiting! So with that side, I’d like to share with you: M.J. Kane’s Top Ten Things I’ve Learned During My Writing Journey: 10. Research comes in many forms. Don’t be afraid to use them! If this is your first time trying your hand at becoming an author, I’m sure you’ve already stockpiled your library with books on writing and editing to get you started. My local library was a great place to find books, but not all can be found there. Tip: Hang out at your local Barnes and Nobel book store (if you can find one still open!) Take pen and paper and cruise the shelves for books on writing and writing in your genre. Find a nice corner, and take notes. It’s free and the access to the information you seek is priceless! Scan the internet for articles and blogs dealing with the same thing – such as this one – and pick up pointers from those who have been in the writing game longer than you have. There’s a wealth of advice to be found. 9. Patience, coffee, and a box of chocolate. Patience is key when working on your character outlines, story plots, and settings. It takes time to discover who your characters are and what motivates them. This amount of research takes more than a few hours. Sometimes it can take days. Find a character questioner that works for you. Settle in with your coffee and something sweet and get to know your characters intimately. It’s the only way for your characters to leave the one/two-dimensional life on paper and become three-dimensional. From there, the story will grow and find a life of its own. 8. Find music that inspires you to write and edit too! Now that you’ve got your outline and discovered your characters, you need to find inspiration! Music can establish the mood of a scene, influence the story’s flow, or even explain what a character is feeling when they can’t say it themselves. 7. Passive Word Check List. This is like holding a magic wand in your hand when editing. Search for words that make the passages wordy or boring because the same words are repeated over, and over again. The trick to writing a story that does not bore your readers is to paint your prose with colorful and creative ways that express your character's emotions and thoughts. My ‘kryptonite’ list includes the words: was, that, saw, feel, look, and see, for starters. Then there are words that often have the wrong tense when used such as a/an, to/too, its/its. My personal list has forty-one words/phrases I check before the chapter is marked ‘edited’. This list came from words that were pointed out by my critique partners as they read my work. 6. Thesaurus and/or dictionary. This is the answer to the dreaded passive word checklist. If your brain is fried and you can’t think creatively, this is your lifeline! Not sure if that word will fit correctly in your sentence, use the dictionary. Need to find another way to say ‘see’…thesaurus is the way to go! 5. A locked door and a good pair of headphones can make any work space personal. Everyone can’t have the dream writing space like Nora, but you can create your own slice of writing heaven. Mine is in my bedroom where my desk is located next to a big picture window. Since its fall, it’s beautiful to watch the trees change color and the squirrels run around collecting food for winter. As long as the door is locked and headphones tuned on high, I can ignore the knocking on the door and get into a scene…lol, at least that’s the plan. Still, haven’t got the kiddies to go along with the plan. For some reason, every time I start working on a love scene, that’s the time ALL of them suddenly need my attention. Talk about a mood killer! 4. Beta Readers, what more can I say? So, you’ve sweated blood and tears to write the perfect story. You’ve burned up brain cells and blew a few fuses to create your literary perfection. Time to take that baby on a test run. Find your beta readers, whether they are critique partners, family members, or a friend you’ve made on Twitter, Facebook or any other social networking site…you need real feedback. If you can get someone who writes the same genre as you, they can give let you know if your MS fits the genre or if you’ve missed something. Finding someone who doesn’t normally read your genre and hooking them with your story can build confidence. That means you’ve got what it takes to tell a strong story. 3. Join social networking sites for support, marketing, and promotion. Most of us have already joined Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, and Goodreads. Now’s there’s Linkedin, and a god only knows how many more. In this day and age, you can never have enough ways to connect to other writers for advice and support. If you haven’t done it yet, start writing a blog. It’s not only a great way to share your work with others, it’s also a way to create a fan base and let people know what you’re doing. 2. Find an editor! Whether your goal is to self publish, e-publish, or try your luck with the selling your book to one of the big publishing houses, and editor is key! Readers are picky and will not fail to notice if your story has not gotten that ‘professional’ touch. Everyone can’t be an English major and know every writing rule known to man. That’s why God created editors! LOL…but seriously we all need them. It will cost some money, but having that touch added to your work will separate your hard work from those who aren’t willing to put in the work. But don’t fear…I’m not the only one who’s read a book written by a well-known author and distributed by a major publishing house and find some sort of grammatical or technical error. So, indie published authors don’t fear! Do the best you can, work with an editor and understand: you can’t please everybody! No matter what you do, somebody is NOT going to like something about your story and find a reason to criticize it. Look at it this way…at least they read it! 1. The will and desire to try again and again until you get the story right, no matter how many re-writes/edits it takes! That statement pretty much says it all. If you don’t have the desire to work through the ups and downs of telling the story and doing the best you can, then maybe becoming an author is not for you. Admit defeat and try your hand at something else. But if you step away and find you can’t keep your mind off of writing and your characters keep nagging you to tell their story, try again. Take a writing class, read more books on writing. Read authors in your genre and see what it is they have done to make them become successful. Then try again! With that said, break time is over! I’m off to work on my second round of edits…. Tell next time, WRITE WELL!!!!! 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