SUPERFLUOUS - back on track

For a day or two I thought I'd gone off the rails: plot going haywire, characters taking over, a bit of dissatisfaction setting in. But hey, in the middle of one night I woke up to find my brain had spurted out a terrific ending. I'm going to shock the pants off every reader - I'm usually a softy with my characters but this time they're going to leave my readers shouting curses. I'm half way through chapter eleven and Jerry and two of his gals are on a long drive. The other two gals remain in the house. It's not going to be a good ending. Oh sure, there's plenty of wildness to come, but the new character I introduced many thousands of words ago is going to make her presence felt. She's a nasty piece of work and thinks she's got the wherewithal to take on my lead gal, Erica. We shall see what happens, but after WASTED PAIN and PROTECTION, I think Jerry and the gals are going to take a long retirement, and that doesn't necessarily mean these lovely folk are going to get killed off. Toodle-e-pip.