Tips for Writers: Dialogue Tags—Keep it Simple

"Keep it simple," he said. "What's that you say?" she asked.
It is tempting for some writers to load dialogue tags withtoo much freight. In general, though, the simpler tags are the best. "Said" and"asked" are nearly invisible to the reader, and that's what the writer wants.They don't draw attention to themselves; the reader remains engaged with thecontent of the dialogue without being distracted by some odd delivery. Wheneverpossible, convey the method of delivery with the words themselves.
If you want to go beyond "said" and "asked," though—after all,some variety in the work can be nice—be sure that you stick to what I call "speakingverbs," verbs that describe the action of speaking words (such as "shout," "yell,"or "whisper"). Some speaking verbs, however, should generally be avoided on thegrounds that they tell the reader howthe words are being spoken when the manner of speaking could more effectivelybe shown through the dialogue itself. For example, "commanded" is arguably aspeaking verb, but a command is generally inherent in the words spoken. Ingeneral, avoid these "telling" speaking verbs.
Some writers go a step further and attempt to build agesture or an expression into the dialogue tag itself, and that just doesn'tmake sense. A character can say words while smiling, but he can't smile thewords. Likewise for "he laughed," "he pointed," "he worried," and so on.
I see these problems all the time in student work, and it'seasily fixed and explained. But the reason I chose to write about this topicthis week is because I've been reading some short stories by the great storywriter W. Somerset Maugham, and he makes this same mistake all the time. Here,for example, is a line from the story "P.& O." (which I'm reading in theshort collection Maugham's MalaysianStories):   

"I suppose a woman of forty has no right to mind how shelooks," she smiled, as though he must know what vain thoughts occupied her.

Willie! No, no, no! What were you thinking? She didn't smile those words! She mayhave been smiling when she said them, but you can't smile words.
So here's the tip: Keep it simple. When in doubt, stick with"said" or "asked." Even if you're Somerset Maugham. (That's him in the picture, by the way.)