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Dec 03, 2011 05:00PM

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Thank you.
I can rough out a novel, but as you have said, it is buffing it into readability that is the issue.
The reason I have attempted novels is my readers.
They demanded, begged for and offered to bribe me for longer books. so, I tried to accommodate them. I love that they enjoy my works and don't want to disappoint them.
Frankly, I have some of the nicest readers one could imagine. A few letters I have received have literally moved me to tears.
The worst reviews I have gotten for my works all harp on the length of them. I took that as a personal failure and tried to correct it. While my novels got high 4's and 5's out of 5, they didn't satisfy the readers, only the reviewers.
The readers wanted cute short stories that kept the novel going in their minds. So, more cute perky stories with characters I love to write.
As a full time job, writing is amazing. I love my work and love my readers. My writing hours are usually 7pm to 2am, so anyone who thinks it isn't a full time job can kiss my keyboard. ;) (I have been trying to work that into a sentence for years)
Pia, I wish you all the best and success in whatever project comes up next for you.

Maybe the compromise to the long vs. short delema could be solved like the commic/manga authors; who bundle several episodes, or in your case ahort stories together as a special edition or collectors' edition. I enjoyed the Champoins anthology very much and have used it to hook more fans "onto your line". These make nice gifts for those who don't have a lot of time to wade through an entire novel like breaktime, bussride, and even waiting room readers that want to take a quick mental vacation. Just picked up the first two of your new series and am looking forward to eXtasy books carring your spin of the Sleeping Beauty tale (3mos from now). I hope you pay your muse well too, because he/she/they also work very hard ;) Thanks for feeding us with your joy and enthusiasm in a world too full of doom and gloom.
SAB



Viola, I think the key is to have something that ties all the stories together, such as the same characters in each or a central theme that creates interaction between the characters in each story. Mercedes Lackey seems to follow the first route, with stories about the same people making a book. I just read The Shop on Blossom Street by Debbie Macomber (my first time reading her books). It was written as the stories of four women who meet because they are all part of a class at a yarn shop.
There are very few scenes with the four of them together, and just a few more when 2 or 3 of them are together. Nearly the entire book takes place outside the store, with references to the knitting class. In this case I had wanted more about the growth of the friendships between the women. BTW, the book has something like 50 short chapters because it is constantly switching between the different stories.
However, you already have stories with action that occurs at about the same time and have related characters. It probably would take much for you to figure out a way to build upon some unifying theme. Lackey also turned previously published short stories into chapters in her books. You could try that with your Champions series or another theme.
Whew! That was much more than I planned to write. Since I'm not a writer myself, take my thoughts with a grain of salt. These are simply things I have observed in my time as a reader.

