Finishing up Don’t Go Far redo

My plan with running through Don’t Go Far real quick was to refamiliarize myself with the story. I figured I may as well do a quick edit on it just to be sure I have everything clear and it all makes sense with the overall story of the world, not just series. I think I’ve only really put in a few major changes. Or, what would be considered major. It’s just a few notes (sentences) that I’ve typed in which end up tying in the overall story to the rest of the world.

Not that it hasn’t been tie...