P.D.James Shouldn't

Oh dear. I wish P.D. James hadn't written this. The plot is so-so, strained. And she starts out in sub-Austen tones to get us in the mood, the times. But inevitably, as pure story takes over, the language reverts to the mundane - and it doesn't work. Beware the writer who would attempt Austen irony without the touch. Best not try. Please don't do this again!