Readers, Characters and Word Choices – Part 2

Metaphors or Similes: Readers, Characters and Word Choices – Part 2

Last time, I talked about word choices and how they should remain true to the character, while still keeping the reader in mind.

I’m probably going to get in trouble for this, but another “writerly” thing that bothers me is using too many vivid metaphors or similes. Some writing instructors swear by them, telling you they have to be new and visceral. When I try, my editor and critique partners mark them as unneeded or “purple...