Don't Break the Glass

Sarah is wondering why you stopped reading?
Etymologycan be both fun and frustrating.  Fictional writers get to do pretty much whatever they want—provided they don’t break the reader’s willing suspension of disbelief.
That’s the trick.
Recently, I reviewed a draft blurb for another author who used a line similar to this:
When Sarah and George touch, they can cause great destruction, ruin buildings, or build them back up.
Nothing inherently wrong with that.  It reads like a young adult, s...