The revision continues...

<---Ain't this the truth? Yep. It is. I love The Goonies movie!
I spent most of the day revising yesterday, and managed to get 30/117 pages revised. Not a bad start. I found a bit of repetition, deleted some things that didn't add anything to the story, moved stuff around, have already strengthened a bunch of things, and even managed to cut about 200 words.
Very excited about the way the story's shaping up. 
I'm hoping to get another 30pgs done today. :) Halfway mark, here I come!
Last night, I ...