Comments from the Writer’s Side (part two)

Generally speaking, pre-publication critical comments fall into two broad groups: reader reactions (“I started skimming right here.” “This whole section confused me.”) and specific suggestions (“Have ninjas leap through the window!” “I think you should cut the grandmother character.”) Both require some thought, but along different lines. (This is true even if it’s an editor making the comments; the only difference is that you have to listen more carefully to editors. Your friends’ advice, you...