The Ugly Duckling is uglier than I thought

All of my pathetic and inane fears about my manuscript being a mess were for not.  Just three days after submitting the latest version of UNEXPECTEDLY, MILO to my editor for review, she replied with glowing remarks, several bright and shiny compliments and just a handful of minor, consistency-centered suggestions for revision.

The six weeks of torturous editing and revising have apparently paid off. 

I'm currently in the process of completing a final read-through of the book before...