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My true weakness: writing scenes that take place in crowds without using the word “crowd” fifty times in a paragraph
“The large collection of bodies” • “The throng of people” • “The congregated folks” • “The rabble of women” • “The horde of human hams” • “The mass of homosapiens” • “The mob of mob” • “Deluge.” • “Don’t say crowd.” • “The.” • “Characters” • “In a crowd.” • “The crowd.” • “There’s a crowd.” • “Crowded crowds” • “More crowds” •
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