Yeah, I think I'm getting through this tricky part--after having overwritten it, underwritten it, rethought it, and re-sorted it out multiple, multiple, multiple times.
Another thought/quote passed along by the friend who's been reading Alderson's book has turned out to be very helpful.
Re. the "threshhold" between beginning and middle*:
"When you find the scene that serves this purpose, rewrite it with the significance it deserves."
*See previous post
Published on October 30, 2011 18:08