David Fletcher – Chapter One/Two?

AUTHOR’S NOTE: If anyone wanted to chime in and be beta on this, my concerns are as follows: Does this bit fit as part of Chapter One? Or does it stand on its own as Chapter Two? Also, where do I go from here? How would you like this resolved? What scene would best fit? The initial draft had the boys joining their father at the dinner table for more sly info-dumps/world building/character development. Thanks in advance for any comments.

 

By the time a towel-clad David had trudged to his room...