THE STORY MAP: EXAMPLE - 'FOOLS RUSH IN'

I want to be extremely transparent here. This is the initial draft of the first part in my Story Map: the romance novel I've been working on for a while. It's not perfect, not by a long shot. But here it is, and there are two important points I want to make on it: It works. I have a tough time with writing enough. Typically, my writing is far shorter than it should be, and I don't include enough exposition or development to effectively get my story across. This method works -- when I wrote th...