Real Life Diagnostics: Would You Read On?

Critique By Maria D'Marco

Real Life Diagnostics is a weekly column that studies a snippet of a work in progress for specific issues. Readers are encouraged to send in work with questions, and we diagnose it on the site. It’s part critique, part example, and designed to help the submitter as well as anyone else having a similar problem.

If you're interested in submitting to Real Life Diagnostics, please check out these guidelines.

Submissions currently in the queue: Three

Please Note: As of today, RLD slots are booked through June 30.

This week’s questions:

1. Is the heroine dropped in the middle of the trouble?

2. Is there any “telling”?

3. Is there interior monologue without action?

4. Would you want to read on? 

Market/Genre: Christian Women’s Fiction

On to the diagnosis…
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