Well, finally got the feedback I was looking for from both of my beta readers. They had some great suggestions, so I have one short background scene to add, and a few others to enhance/expand with a bit more detail.
All other things willing – those things being my girlfriend and my Mistress, whose collective demands on my time come first – I should have “Sharing is Caring: A Cuckold’s First Date” published this week.
Perhaps the best comment I received from my beta readers was this:
The cocksucking, creampie, taste and flavour descriptions are better than all the pretend stories. You are either well researched or you have tasted cum in her pussy for real.
If I can successfully convey my own experiences, passing along all the sensory detail I’ve enjoyed over the years, then I’ve truly accomplished something.
While Cuckold Chooses Cleanup was a fantasy, this new book is a true story. Not quite 100% true, because it’s hard to remember every single detail from 2 years ago, but as authentic and honest as I could make it.
Published on June 04, 2018 06:18