I sort of forgot I wrote a 12,000 word horror serial on r/nosleep in 2016

Deadlines mean I don’t spend as much time on reddit as I used to, but I was messing around there today and remembered that woah, I posted an 8-part horror serial there just as I was wrapping up my Masters of Teaching. So I went hunting, and it was all still there. It’s a short story about child experimentation, brain reprogramming and body horror. I don’t know if it’s any good, but it’s 12,000 words of fiction that I shouldn’t leave to rot without at least evaluating it. So… Edit and polish? Or throw it in the bin? Have a read and tell me what you think! Part 1: https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm... Part 2: https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm... Part 3: https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm... Part 4: https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm... Part 5: https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm... Part 6: https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm... Part 7: https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm... https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm... https://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comm...