Good writing today, although I feel virtually certain this scene will not make the final cut. There's not much action besides drinking lemonade and taking a bath; there's a certain amount of playing with themes, but I suspect even this will turn out to be an understudy for better handling of the same themes later.
Why write it, then, if I already know that? Well, it's because I need to understand what happens in this scene – in an irritating amount of detail – before I can write other, better ...
Published on October 25, 2011 10:27