Day 23 – Avicii

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“My hands are tied but not tight enough


You’re the high that I can’t give up


Oh Lord, here we go”


Like a drug pumping through my veins


Here I am back again


Begging for you to take me there


Although we’re going nowhere



I know you are no good for me


Afterwards only pain will be


For this addiction I will bleed


Here to do the dirty deed



Do to me whatever you will


Make our sinful juices spill


Overdose my senses on you


Hit the spot the way do



Push me over the edge


Being with you is dangerous


Here for you to destroy me


Never will I be free


“My hands are tied but not tight enough


You’re the high that I can’t give up


Oh Lord, here we go”



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Day 23’s challenge

For Day 23 the prompt is “And now for today’s (optional) prompt! Kate Greenstreet’s poetry is spare, but gives a very palpable sense of being spoken aloud – it reads like spoken language sounds. In our interview with her, she underscores this, stating that “when you hear it, you write it down.” Today, we challenge you to honor this idea with a poem based in sound. The poem, for example, could incorporate overheard language. Perhaps it could incorporate a song lyric in some way, or language from something often heard spoken aloud (a prayer, a pledge, the Girl Scout motto). Or you could use a regional or local phrase from your hometown that you don’t hear elsewhere, e.g. “that boy won’t amount to a pinch.”


I’ve always loved Avicii’s music and I was sad to hear he had passed this weekend. I hoped the news was a hoax but it is wasn’t. Today’s poem is using the lyrics from one of his songs.



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