Potential Blurb for Veznek

For those of you who follow this page regularly, you know that I like to post my first-drafts of blurbs here for critiques and feedback. Well, that time has come again. Without further ado, take a look at the blurb below. I would love any feedback and edits you can offer!

 

Kholvaria has been attacked. Its greatest city destroyed.

A cloud of debris now covers the void once filled by Vigilant Behemoth. In the wake of this unexpected assault, the Chiefdom’s leadership is promptly evacuated to a fallback shelter beneath the surface.

But the horrors of the Behemoth’s destruction cannot be forgotten. Here in the grimy confines beneath the Earth, Kho Veznek, second in command of the Chiefdom, will stop at nothing to claim vengeance on those responsible for his city’s destruction… even if that means going through his own people to do it.

As tensions mount between the ranks of humans and Kholvari alike, the fate of the world comes to its ultimate tipping point.

Author’s Warning: This novel contains scenes of graphic sexual trauma and physical torture and is intended for mature audiences. Reader discretion is advised.

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