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The first thing that came to mind when I read your description "all the ridiculous people that I encountered during my military career" was Joseph Heller's "Catch 22" - a perfect example of ridiculous people in a military setting (and a book I love). Interestingly, I think the reason why "Catch 22" works so well (for me) is that the characters are so colourful & exaggerated.I would say that if your characters lost their life and reality for you when you changed their names, that means you haven't sufficiently entered into them imaginatively. I think you need to relocate them in your imagination, & give yourself permission to enter their hearts & minds, as if you knew them as well as you know yourself. And this means making them composite characters, including aspects of other people you've met in the past, etc. Also I think you need to trust your own ingenuity to devise new names which achieve the effect you desire. As long as you think of these people as "out there" & relate to them as "other" then they will not live as fictional characters. I've done this myself in the past - tried to use words people actually spoke, base a character entirely on an actual person, & it just doesn't work. It's really strange, but it just limits everything, makes it flat & unconvincing and mediocre.
I hope this helps!
Yes. That's good, thank, Sheila.I think that I need to move several steps sideways and re-invent Plug and Frog. Shame though. The title in my mind has always been "Plug and Other Ridiculous Military Idiots."
Also, you hit upon something which strikes home with me: Catch 22, Spike Milligan's military moires, MASH 4077th, Virgin Soldiers, Blackadder Goes Forth . . . and so on. These are all marvellous books/scripts in my mind. And often too close to the truth for comfort!



This problem has stopped me from making progress with a book about all of the ridiculous people that I encountered during my military career, and the actions and events with which they were associated.
I wrote parts of the book, and then used "search and replace" to make changes, but the stories lost all of their life and reality for me.
Some of it was OK, but the main character, whose nickname was Plug, fell to pieces if I changed his name. There was the story about how he came by that name. There was the sory about how the Kenyan soldiers mis-heard his introduction an insisted on calling him Frog, and the appropriateness of that moniker.
Then there is the issue of who might sue me, but I may be persuaded that that would be publicity!
You can see that this is a difficult one for me, and I would appreciate any advice on the matter.