A Return to Show, Don’t Tell

Now…. let me see…. where were we?

(sound of foot tapping – or is it a pencil?) You were going to explain about how you show, don’t tell your story.

I was?

Oh for heaven’s sake, will you get on with I? I’ve been waiting weeks!

Not possible. It’s  only been days since I posted the first part. You can re-read it if you want.

(grumble) I suppose it hasn’t been that long, but you sort of left us hanging, you know.

Well, I hope you got some writing done while you were waiting.

No, I was waiting to...