A Possible Blurb For “Rogue Ship”

I’d appreciate it if people could comment on this and tell me how they like it.

The Commonwealth is the a society that humans have dreamed of for centuries—there is no poverty, no exploitation, no scarcity. Less technological aliens are protected by ironclad rules, and the universe is at peace.

Fah Enciso is something rare by the standards of the Commonwealth: she’s a criminal. Accused and convicted of killing nearly thirty defenseless aliens, she was sentenced to intensive therapy on a space...