A first look at Retribution

Let's not dilly dally with the words and the things, friends.

Retribution is coming, after all. Which means I need to get my butt back to finishing it.

To that end, I'll emphatically point out that this is hardcore rough draft material. We're talking 40 grit sandpaper, folks. As rough as it gets. 

Now, I don't think it's actually that bad (my drafts normally aren't), I just wanted to throw out the disclaimer BECAUSE I'M SCARED, GUYS!

Now let's take a look at this here story biscuit.

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