date
newest »

message 1:
by
Michelle
(new)
Oct 01, 2011 06:09PM
![Michelle [Helen Geek]](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1448463806p1/5557851.jpg)
reply
|
flag

http://www.allromanceebooks.com/conte...
I suspect that is no better - don't know what I'm doing wrong.
![Michelle [Helen Geek]](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1448463806p1/5557851.jpg)
http://www.allromanceebooks.com/conte......"
This link worked. I really hope people take you up on the vote because the story was really cute. I could actually see it as more than a short. Good luck. I'll try to remember to vote after the sixth on the next round. I didn't read any of the others [not a big short story fan typically] - only the one you were matched with. It started with much too much backstory. Even I know you need to suck them in first - especially in a short. You do this very well. Let me know how this goes.