Writing on the Wild Edges: Participant Poems (Anne MacDermaid)

This past October we led one of our Writing on the Wild Edges retreats on the beautiful island of Inismor off the coast of Galway. We will be sharing some of the writing which participants gave us permission to share here in the next few weeks. Up next are poems by Anne McDermaid.


Dry Stone Walls


Sea walls of boulders

look invincible

barricades constructed

against the tides and

forces of nature

yet here and there

I see breaks where

fresh air and storm surges

wash into sparse fields and

change the patterns of

survival once again.

Stone can fence you in or

protect you,

crush you or

give you a vantage point

become a fortress or

a chapel or

a vault.

I must choose

what to build.


An Intention


What ancestral memories

call me home to a land of

rugged rocks and roiling sea?

Not much comfort evident here

yet there is a bright peat fire

at the hearth

warming both heart and soul

if I should choose to

look both inward and beyond.


St. Kieran’s Church


I saved the smoothest roundest stone

til last

warmed in the palm of my hand

most precious like memory

because it is small yet

heavy with imaginings and

echoes of pilgrims

whose hands have bequeathed

this stone and this time

to me.


Grey Day


A benediction of blackberries

reaches over the dry stone wall

and offers a rich dense gift to savor

against the grey stone and

the grey sea

flat with a long surge

that washes all colour and hue away

except for the splash of red

on my fingers.


 Before Words

“These were perhaps the original poetry” —Moya Cannon


Hands moving across a table

towards each other or

stretching in unison to the

words of a song

swaying in rhythm guided by

the metre of breathing or

hearts beating as one

like a repetitive chorus that

grows and swells to a

sustained  chord

echoing and ringing and then

finally finding words.


Seven Churches


Rings and roads of rocks

lead to the sea with

salt air tangy in the nostrils

lead to the pier where the

boat pushes off and the

invitation is there to

come aboard

head to new waters and

find a new country

rising out of the mist

unexpected to the eye but

foreshadowed by the ears’

quick attention to surf pounding

on the shore and the

scent of sweet mown hay

drifting seaward on the breeze.


The Beehive Hut


I sit in the silence

feel sun warming every bone

feet on pilgrims’ ground

winding path before and beyond

scattered with blackberries and birds

ripple of breeze and

breath of the Spirit.

In the long low light

sparseness and simplicity

turn into a holy feast.



Rev. Anne MacDermaid is a retired United Church of Canada minister, who was called to ordained ministry after a previous career as University Archivist at Queen’s University, Kingston, Canada. Of Irish and United Empire Loyalist heritage, Anne served in several pastoral charges, chaired the Board of Queen’s Theological College, and has had a lifelong passion for creative writing, proclaimed in sermons and in poetry.  Quilting, hiking, gourmet cooking, photography, travelling the world with friends old and new, and spending time with her son and his family and her own far-flung siblings add richness to the joys of living.   Her lifelong journey of faith has been “before the Lord” as a comfort and a companion.

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