Don’t Detail Every Movement Your Story Characters Make

Try this exercise and see if you can improve the example below that over details the movements of the characters. You’ll replace movements with fewer words or delete them. Have fun. First, read the detailed paragraph. The Passage Loaded With Details Dan gripped the handles of the wheelbarrow full of seedlings, lifted them up, and […]

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