Disembodied - Dreaming in Stories PT 2

Back in February I published three, I guess you would call them flash fiction stories because they were only a hundred words or so and they got a good response so let's see if it works again.

Please remember this a pretty unvarnished and right from my subconscious with very little literary pretense.

Disembodied

I was attending a Christian college when I was driving I came to a stop sign a car pulled up behind me, I felt its malevolent pressure and I knew no one was behind the wheel I wanted to get out and see but I was too terrified.

I was working at a restaurant, Kim, a hostess, her hair was gold was one of the prettiest women I know, started getting sick, her body convulsing as if she were about to throw up. I sat her down in the vestibule waiting area on a couch next to an old man he looked concerned but I had no other place to move him to. I asked if someone could call 911 but suddenly I remembered the car and I couldn’t move, I turned back to Kim and saw she was covered by a sheet I tried pulling it off to find her head but I couldn’t it was like a cocoon I laid next to it and started making out with her.

I went back to sleep with the TV on so I didn’t have to share my sleep with these spirits.

If you like ghost stories and/or horror check out my short story "The Captured Dead" available on Kindle (http://tiny.cc/gd20ny), KOBO (https://www.kobo.com/us/en/ebook/the-...) or their supported devices. If you know someone interested in this sort of writing please pass it on!

Keep rocking!
Jim
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Published on October 04, 2017 12:22 Tags: dreams, ghost-stories, horror
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Jim Cherry Thank you Harry & Lady C for liking this. It's weird but these unvarnished things, dreams actually keep coming up sort of story like, and they're horror, and they get a lot of reaction, I wonder if it's the muted or stifled sexual components of the dreams, this one especially.

Jim


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