Story Development – Search for The Astral Dragon

[image error]A lengthy excerpt from my new story, Search for the Astral Dragon, is below. First a bit of discussion:

I decided to gear my new story toward young adults instead of middle-grade readers. That allows me more flexibility with regard to how much pain the heroic characters can suffer. If you read the original, you will be able to see the changes and why the new version is clearly no longer a middle-grade story.

Here is a link to the first version – http://www.theauthorschair.com/2015/07/21/story...