Poems About Magic and Love from readers

The Poet & The Prophecy smallSo I'm celebrating the imminent release (this week, they say) of Magic U book 4 ("The Poet and the Prophecy") and over the weekend I ran an "extra credit" assignment — anyone who wrote me a poem about love, magic, or preferably both, would get their choice of either Magic U book 1 or Spellbinding (the Magic U short story anthology). And my favorite would win a signed paperback of book 1 or the whole Magic U ebook set.


However, I'm having trouble picking a favorite because the poems are all AWESOME. (If you're wondering why poetry, poetry is one of the major magical skills one can study at my magical university.)


So help me choose a winner? I've installed a "polls" widget below. Please vote for your favorite of the choices below! I think I got everyone collected together from all my various journals and emails…


Choose a winner from these five awesome poems on love and magic:


(Voting form at the bottom…)



A Villanelle by Roz Kaveny:


Love is the spell that changes everything


It makes us better or it makes us worse


whether we're beggar girl or soldier king.


It writes the songs that all musicians sing


and sits beside their chair when they rehearse


Love is the spell that changes everything.


To do without it was to forge the ring


that wrecked the world – the Nibelung's bleak curse.


Whether we're beggar girl or soldier king


It fans our sleep with its all-caring wing.


And for the dying it's the kindest nurse


Love is the spell that changes everything


It is our greatest joy and suffering


It is the source of all our greatest verse


whether we're beggar girl of soldier king


villain's destruction, pure saint's hallowing


It rocks our cradle and it pulls our hearse


Love is the spell that changes everything


whether we're beggar girl or soldier king.


A Haiku by Yasuhime:

The magic of love


Can be studied a lifetime


Yet never mastered.


Free-form Acrostic by Cecile Grey (no relation, LOL)

Miles spill out in front of me. They spell out

A drawling landscape of "what if". But isn't it

Graduated animal impulse, this needy alliance: Love?

Isn't it just the slurred edge of an instinct. Or is it

Conjured possibility. Human idiosyncrasy. Magic maybe.


Sonnet by TedddyWolf


Will we go raking all the autumn leaves?

The lawn you love is buried underneath,

Or shall a spell that some enchanter weaves

Bespell them all into a fallen wreath?

The neighbors lawn is cleared and oddly green,

Without a leaf among the many trees.

Yet so maintained it is an eerie scene,

As nothing blows upon the gentle breeze.

Our neighbors have forgotten being young,

The magic of a child in the yard.

Our piles full of dampened leaves have clung,

Until we, holding hands, jump in them hard.

Our autumn is a precious time for fun.

The spell of time with you is never done.


TeddyWolf also did a redux in haiku form:

Fallen Autumn leaves

Now ensorcelled in a pile

Hold my hand and jump!




Free verse from JumpupHigh:


"Making You Laugh in Public"


You let me straddle your lap

When we are in inappropriate places

You speak to me in French

Then don't tell me what it means

You let me kiss you when I am drunk

And bite you on the shoulder

You play with me in my city

Before going home alone

You visit me in my dreams

So that I won't ever forget you

This is who we are

And who we always will be


I know it's hard to choose, so you can pick up to TWO to vote for!

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Published on September 20, 2011 08:00
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