Conciseness!
Today we finish the three Cs with Conciseness. We have already discussed Consistency and Clarity in previous posts. They do overlap. Consistency and conciseness both help clarity. And clarity is what we are striving for in both our written and spoken communication.
Here are some ways to make your writing more concise.
You don’t need to use long words when a short one will do just fine. We are not asking you to write like a first grader, but short words actually have more punch.
Following along with #1, short sentences also tend to be stronger and more effective than longer (and often meandering) ones. It is best to vary sentence length — some short, some medium, some long. Sentences that are all the same length tend to make writing choppy.
Nominalizations add unnecessary words and weaken writing. What is a nominalization? Look at this sentence: The committee will hold a meeting to conduct a discussion about new equipment. Now look at this sentence: The committee will meet to discuss new equipment. Why say hold a meeting when you can simply say meet? Why say conduct a discussion instead of simply discuss? Nominalizations are the taking of a simple action verb and turning it into a longer and weaker noun phrase.
Wordiness in both writing and speaking is the antithesis or conciseness. Wordiness includes filler words and phrases, excess verbiage (see #5), and redundancy (see #6). When people speak, they sometimes like to use words to fill space, hold the floor while they think, or make those to whom they are talking feel stupid.
Uh, so, well, and you know are sometimes used to fill space while the speaker thinks of what to say next. And some people like to add a phrase to the end of what they are saying to make you feel kind of stupid: Understand? Do you know what I mean? Did you get that? Right? “
Excess verbiage includes wordy phrases in both writing and speaking. Wordy phrases can begin sentences: What I did is . . . What this means is . . . The reason is because . . . and even the double is (oh, horror!): What I did is is . . . Other wordy phrases include the fact that . . . and that being said . . .
Redundancy will add unnecessary words to your writing and speech. Here are some common redundancies:
7 a.m. in the morning instead of just 7 a.m.
close proximity instead of just close
immediate vicinity instead of just near
small in size instead of just small
in order to instead of just to
at this point in time instead of now
as yet instead of just yet
collaborate together instead of just collaborate, which implies together
due to the fact that instead of just because
each and every instead of just each or every
personal opinion instead of just opinion
I would appreciate it if you would instead of just please
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