Adventures in Editing – Part 2

Adventures in Editing, Part 2

Last week, I posted part one of my “Adventures in Editing.” As promised, here are more steps in my process.

After a long talk with my editor, we agreed that almost everything I had written “fit” the story. We discussed how to add more of a “Blackthorne op” feel to the manuscript, and came to the conclusion that to open the file and stick in an op would change the whole tone of the book, which is Brett proving himself worthy by succeeding at a security/bodyguard a...