Search for the Avenger Analysis – Part One

[image error]Let’s analyze the beginning of this story and see how it satisfies the suggestions I made for a good story launch:

Here is a link to the story’s first two chapters:

Story Development – A Space Adventure

We will first look at the list I provided in the link below:

Writing Tips: How to Start a Story (The Ordinary World – Part 1)

1. Grab the reader’s attention with a hook beginning

The first sentence is – “I woke to another morning in outer space.”

Since my target audience is 8 to 12 years old...