WIP excerpt: “The Archer”

With a loud snap, Jack stepped squarely on a dead branch just beneath the leaf litter.Tolan turned and spoke softly,


“Even the forest bison are quieter than you.”


Jack shrugged and waved a hand at an insect.


Tolan went on,


“If you wish to die today then continue without looking for where to put your feet first.”


Tolan waggled a long finger for emphasis,


“Walk as I do. Stop when I signal you to stop and move when I signal you to move.”


Jack nodded and leaned against a large red oak.


Tolan frowned.


“Did I say to lean against that tree?”


 “No.”


Tolan sighed.


“Surely the gods sent you as a test.”


© Erik Hansen 2017


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Published on June 26, 2017 05:13
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